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Tuesday, June 2, 2015

Connor the king

Connor the king




Huff puff a random dude was running from a pirate named Bucky he had a sword and the random dude was named Connor.It was at that moment that Connor remembered his dad gave him a pockit knife,he got it out and he cut of Buckys arm AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHKKKK Bucky skremed.  

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  1. AnonymousJune 2, 2015 at 4:56 PM

    HI Connor I like the way you said huff and puff

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  2. AnonymousJune 2, 2015 at 5:03 PM

    Great work Connor I Like how you said AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHKKKK by paratene

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  3. AnonymousJune 2, 2015 at 5:13 PM

    I like how you said random dude it was interesting . You could of add more to the story?
    By Karanjot

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  4. AnonymousAugust 19, 2015 at 5:23 PM

    I like your work but maybe you could work on spelling and the violence level.
    by Paratene ,Naman ,Deisharne, Reese, David, charley and Josiah

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