Massey park pools
Back at Thursday we went to Massey park pools. We had to jump of a wall the at end of the day in the deep end. I was not scared because I have done it before .I was shivering while waiting because it was cold .I was one of the first people to jump .It was really cool. I splashed into the safe water .I loved it.At the end I was cold and shivering.
Damanjit
Damanjit
I enjoyed Massey Park Pools and I jumped in to the deep end. It was cold standing in line waiting. I like how you made the word splashed big,it makes me think that is how big your splash would of been - Emerald
ReplyDeleteThank you Emerald for the feedback what do you think at the end don't look in my work it is a ? By Damanjit
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