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Tuesday, July 21, 2015

George's lady bug story

2 comments:

  1. We love your keywords George we also like how you added the holes in your web illustrations.But next time we think you need to put some more adjectives in your writing we also think you need to put similes in your writing next time.From Jordan,Damanjit,Zachary,Sukhpreet,Rico,Karanjot.

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  2. We like how you displayed your work and picture
    We think you shoud work on putting some similes in your work
    From Sophie Dannielle Zaqeo Kain and Tegan-lee and Chloe

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