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Tuesday, July 21, 2015

Ridhi and Zaqeo's Cloud Maker Story

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  1. Well done Ridhi and Zaqeo. I love how you have included all the keywords to write your story. I particularly like the illustrations done on Google Draw. I look forward to reading more about what you are learning to do.

    Mrs Paniora

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  3. Very impressive story Ridhi and Zaqeo. I saw how hard your worked together to create your story and your picture. I love how you have described the cloud maker as a trident. What shapes would you choose if you were creating clouds? Have you ever gazed at the clouds and seen shapes in them?

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    1. thank you
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